This week in writing we wrote a colour poem about a colour. I write about the green colour. First we wrote in a paper about the colour and do how it looks like, feels like, smells like, tastes like and sounds like. Our focus was on writing the poem. I found how to write the poem is the easiest and I found how to plan is the hardest.
Hi Jyoshika, I really like your colour poem it is very cool to read I did a colour poem too but it was yellow not green, maybe next time you could add more detail of saying that what kind of green things you see sometimes. But good job Bye!
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Thank you Erin and thank you for commenting on my colour poem. Next time I will add so many details to my colour poem.
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