Tuesday, April 9, 2019
Orienteering at the quarry
This week in writing we have writing about the Halsey quarry. We have used the present tense to finish our writing. I didn't found anything hard or easy.
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You are right jyoshika! It was tiring when we was walking up the zig zag hill. I really like your blog jyoshika.
ReplyDeleteThank-you Jyoshika! I really appreciate that. I have commented on your blog. I really like your blog posts.
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ReplyDeleteThank you Mikhanya for commenting on my blog.
ReplyDeleteHi Jyoshika, Miss Goslin here. It is lovely to see the thread comments with you and Mikhanya! Thank you for posting your epic story about our quarry trip. I loved your simile- "my mouth is as dry as the Sahara Desert", it makes it very interesting for the reader to imagine how you felt. I know I felt the same walking up the steep hills. This is an excellent story, but to make it even better you could go into more detail about the 'sounds of birds singing' and add some more wow words to support your detail.
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to your reply.
Miss Goslin